Third Draft of Music Promo

After taking on board feedback from our teachers and focus group we made more alterations to our music video. 

• We removed shots of her in the cafe that were not needed and distracted from the narrative storyline focus 
• We also found some shots that we hadn't yet used of her playing guitar and we used this to fill the empty space 
• We added the ambient sound of typing on the phone at the very beginning of the music video
• Finally, we added text to appear on the screen when she reads the email to make it clear what she is reading is the message is very important to our storyline