- Add in slow motion
- Have different transitions between different locations
- Some shots are too long
- The shot of her getting clothes from her wardrobe is too long and dark
- Try experimenting with different speed and lengths of shot
- The storyline is clear, consise and it makes sense
- Some shots are too static
- Certain shot sizes need to change
- I like the camera movements in the performance segments
- Lip syncing is good and very precise
- It has really good elements to it and I like it
- The way the video is structured is linear
Focus Group Feedback -
Amy:
- The lip syncing in the performance part is really good
- I also like the shots of her in the mirror as they are well framed
- I like the shots of the dog
- I think the last shot of the performance may have been out of sync
- The shot of her leaving the bedroom is a bit confusing
Rhiannon:
- I love the lip syncing shots with the different colour lighting
- The ending shots are very good
- I don't think the narrative is 100% clear as there are some unecessary shots of her eating which don't make sense
- The music starts abruptly and before it starts some form of sound is needed
Ben:
- I like how it finishes with the start of the song
- At the end I wasn't sure if it was a dream or she was actually performing
- Overall I really like it
- When she leaves the bedroom it looks like she is saying goodbye to someone and that is confusing
Joe:
- The best part was the interaction with dog as it was cute but genuine
- In the lip syncing part I liked the lighting as it draws attention to her and is very edgy
- Have more meaningful shots during the pauses
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