This is our second draft for our promotional music video, we took onboard any feedback given to us by our teachers, peers and focus group and made those alteraitons. For instance, we filmed more footage of our protagonist playing her guitar and writing her songs to make that the focal point of the story. We also elimnated some of the shots of her in the cafe as we felt this we too excessive and not needed.
Abbie and I have had ideas of being more creative with the editing itself, we want to add text on the screen for when she is reading the email so the viewer can see what is being said. We will try this in multiple ways and she what works, if not we do have so filmed shots of the laptop screen with the email on. Furthermore, we filled in any gaps that we had but we cut the instrumental at the end as we felt there wasn't anymore shots that we could put in that would look meaningful.
Overall, I am happy with this draft of our music video, I think the narrative is clear and the multiple locations and costume make it look more detailed. However, I do believe that by being more inventive with the editing we could make it even better.
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