Feedback From Focus Group:
Joe -
- I like the locations you chose I think it makes it relatable as it is somewhere that you can see yourself being at
- The use of smoke flares are an interesting concept and I like how the reoccur throughout the video
- To improve try using more editing techniques and a bigger variety of shots
Amy -
- I like how you used the beat and tempo of the music to cut and edit the video to as it is engaging and increases the pace
- I also liked the narrative of the video although it could be made clearer
- To improve I would make the shots less static by including more moving shots and make sure you change costumes for different times/scenes/locations
Rhiannon -
- I liked certain aspects of the performance especially the bits filmed in the field as the lip syncing was successful their
- I also liked the smoke flares as they are commonly seen in indie/alternative music videos
- To improve I would try and improve the quality of the lip syncing in the rest of the video
Ben -
We decided to change our song and concept after speaking to our teacher, peers and focus group and gaining their feedback. Since we still have a good amount of time to make it better we believe it would be in our best interests to change the idea. Also, we wanted to refilm however communication between ourselves and the actors was not the best and their reliability and commitment to the video weren't what we hoped.
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